Ocean report

This is what I have typed so far on my first research paper.  I am trying to make my decision of if this is going to be my new lanhguage arts program or if I want to keep using the big workbook from k12.  I'm not sure.  I'm getting tired of the workbook but I think i would miss it.  I am learning how to make paragraphs in complete papers, so i got to pick anything I wanted to lean about.  I have learned a lot of stuff I didn't know.  And some stuff I learned from a video I watched at the Taylors house on my vacation.  Here is my paper.

Hannah Jane
December 15, 2010

    The ocean is cool.  The animal that live there are fasinating .  Some animals that live in the ocean are dolphins , squid and starfish.
    There are so man things that  make dolphins special .  Dolphins squeak to talk to each other.  Some dolphins hunt by forming a circle, pointing their tails in ward and kicking up sand .Then fish jump out and the dolphins catch them in their mouths.  Dolphins have one calf at a time and six teen in a life time.
             Squid are so awesome.   Squid eat every thing form shrimp to whales.

I have to finish typing my squid paragraph, then write my star fish and closing paragraph and then I will be done and I can pick something new to learn about.